Silent Passage

on becoming nothing

Staring off into space

Seconds drip by

My body ceases to be relevant

I am void

No thoughts

No conscious

Just being

Engulfed in the moments between reality and dream

Between spirit and physical

 

I am not I

I am only an I

Even that I is absorbed into a greater force

 

Existing yet not

 

Staring off into space

I am void

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[Heather]

void, so much more than numb... profoundly written. Says so much!

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it

[Butters]

Well, I know nothing about Buddha but this is a great piece. I thought it seemed alot like dieing must feel. Not the horrific messy knid but the slow, off you go kind. That or being high!

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

cool review, thank you very much

[MOON]

Well like the Buddhist teaching I think says you everything and nothing , I maybe just the ego. Good write.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Thank you, lot's of what Buddha said is practical, I like his teachings