Pyramid Star

Strangers meeting and living

Chance meeting

Golden leaf

Brings greatness into the world

 

Unknown stranger

Watches closely

As the greatness becomes adult

 

Cruel fate

Shadows future

Pain the gateway to new universes

 

Appearance

Fragile snow

Angelic warriors beyond streams

 

She discovers

Forgotten secret

Now, was, and forever

 

Dare you

Travel light

Beyond the imaginations

 

 

Reviews

[HungryGhost]

This flows so nicely and creates the effect that every single word is a pillar of this poem, if you know what I mean. If you don't then, just know that I love this poem! great work :)

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

I know what you mean and thank you for the comp :-)

[WritersRankings]

I shall be allowed to really give this poem props, since it jumps out of the page better than any poem I've read today. I would like to hear this in Hindi or Sanskrit, but oh well...!!

Darn good Abdul

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Thank you so much for the super nice comp, it means a lot when people dig my art.

[Anne Timmins]

one word..wow! This piece flows like an ethereal dream..it captured my interest right off and it pulled me along with such a nice flow.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

thank you so much for reading my work and the very nice comp

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Very beautiful poem, many strange links, universe symbols...fantasy, I love your style, and the hidden meanings. My favorite lines are:

Appearance
Fragile snow
Angelic warriors beyond streams

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

thank you very much for your comp it means a lot :-)