Meeting of minds

Meeting of minds

A Poem by A.D Edwards
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This was written for a friend.

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Two trains on the same track
Bound to collide
An explosion of intellect
as our creativity intertwined

At first it was nothing
Just a simple anomaly
who would have known it would pull us closer
as we succumbed to its gravity

We talked about our passion
our love for words
Now I understand why they say
A single wing is of no use to birds

Is this the will of the fates?
Did they send us to each other?
What should we accomplish?
We are but birds of a feather

Hours seem like weeks
I've known you before
maybe not in this life
but in a past life I'm sure

We are but a reflection
of who we are and want to be
I am curious to learn more about you
as we brave this wide Sargasso sea

© 2015 A.D Edwards


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A darling poem for a friend. I love the descriptive tone, and the future questions. The use of proverbs shows wit and eloquence. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A.D Edwards

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) I like using questions in my work
I like the rhyming... kept good flow throughout the write also. Good work... it's an awesome write for your friend :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A.D Edwards

8 Years Ago

thanks bro!

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A.D Edwards
A.D Edwards

Jamaica



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I am a male of Jamaican nationality.I am an expressive soul. I am drawn to things that have a deep meaning and people who appreciate that. I enjoy reading the works of others. I have been passionate a.. more..

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