A GIRL THING

a girl's pain...a deep view on a girl

A GIRL THING.....

SHE LAYS HELPLESS
DISTRESSED AND UNDRESSED


IN A HAVOC OF SUDDEN LOSS OF HER VIRGINITY
SHE IS SURROUNDED BY RED POOLS OF BLOOD

STRUCK IN THE HANDS OF ANIMALS
THE TOTALLY HELPLESS GIRL SURVIVES DEATH

BUT FACES DEATH EVERYDAY......
THE MOST MEMORABLE MOMENT OF HER LIFE TURNED HORRIBLE

DEAR MANKIND.....

JUST ONE THING......

YOU JUST FLING BITTER ACCUSATIONS AGAINST US FOR EVERYTHING
BUT IS THIS FAIR??

I DONT WANNA BORE YOU BY COMPARING ALL GIRLS WITH YOUR SISTERS AND MOTHER

I JUST WANNA TELL YOU ONE THING

WE DONT EXPECT YOU TO BE OUR FRIEND
BUT DONT TURN A FIEND

WE DONT EXPECT YOU TO BEHAVE MATURE
ATLEAST BE MANNERED

AFTER ALL SHE IS TOO A HUMAN BEING......
HAS THE SAME EMOTIONS YOU HAVE
LIVES THE SAME LIFE YOU LIVE
AND THE MOST IMPORTANT.....


FEELS SEVERE PAIN IN EVEN VERY SMALL THING

WE DONT ORDER YOU NOR PLEAD YOU.....
WHY?WE DONT EVEN SAY YOU ANYTHING

YOU JUST QUESTION YOUR SELF
YOU WILL GET IT.....

IT IS HER LIFE....NOT A JUMBLE....
A JUMBLE EVEN HAS A GOOD SOLUTION.....
BUT SHE.....NEVER....

SHE DONT WANT A FORTUITOUS LIFE
SHE JUST NEEDS PEACE

GIVE HER HER OWN SPACE

FINALLY.....
IF HER LIFE TURNS JUST BETTER.....
SHE WILL AUTOMATICALLY MAKE YOUR'S MARVELLOUS.....

THINK ABOUT IT......

DEDICATED TO ALL GIRLS.....

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[NewAgeOldSoul]

The all caps is a little aggressive. I know that it may be your stylistic choice but it made me struggle to get through the poem. It was distracting.