Immolation in the Forest

detailing that sudden and primal burst of anger, jealousy, and inspiration after a long, brumal depression

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a dark, dreary dream it seems-
no fog thicker than it's haze
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this land is real, it exists-
this place has a sign with its name
3
no map on earth has inked
to draw the arrows to this maze
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a garden of eternity,
where the rabbits, feral and wolves, tame

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this place is cloudy,
but each whispy haze weighs a metric tonne
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the crown on each tree
and their boughs so far up their trunks
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they form a cloak, impenetrable
that paints it sable against the sun
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and what little sunlight dies-
in the ebon sea, its flare had sunk

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there is no light here,
save for an oil-less lamp yet to be lit
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an ashless bonfire-
wood yet to be gathered and be burnt
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these pixies have no home
other than the cage one carries them in it
12
these fireflies have no light,
save for what is suffered and learnt

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the forest makes pub w****s
of those who lose themselves there
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leches of those thirsty
who drink from its streams and creeks
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they fail and falter and fall on the forest floor,
and the bushes wake back to life and stare
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these are the sentinels of the forest,
and it is your surrender they seek


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skulls and rib cages decorate
and hang from the boughs in this forest
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the beaten trail there is paved
with the bones of the pleasant and their tales
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the lamps are candles stuffed in the skulls
of the truthful and honest
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you walk on these and where the bones stop,
you stand on where the last of them failed

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the night here is neverending,
according to whom have endured
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when it actually ends,
all memory of its trees and creeks cease
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each and every soul that stands,
has left footprints here for sure
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no telling which are the footprints of those,
living, lived, or recently deceased

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this place is cold,
the clement light drowned out eons ago
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it's cruel too,
this brumal darkness too tame to kill you
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it keeps your heart-beating,
pounding down on you with layers of snow
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it makes you forget the clement light,
makes you forget the warmth your breath once drew

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how you get there nobody knows,
one wrong step- the forest eats you
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from the sidewalk, from school to home, into the alleyway,
the forest eats you
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the door between your room and the living room's screams,
the forest eats you
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from the covers of your sheet into the noise of the streets,
the forest eats you

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from the street to an inn, back to the street again,
the forest eats you
34
from the light of screen into the darkness of bed,
the forest eats you
35
from the concave stomachs and a mountain of debt,
the forest eats you
36
the stool between you and a knotted rope,
the forest sill eats you

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and then, skin hard and frozen cold
since wandering this grove of a thousand broken lights
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the crown of the trees recede
and the boughs begin to thin towards the opposite pole
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there is no sun here, other than the immolated torch
of your flesh burning bright
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there is no sun here,
other than the immolated phlogiston
that combusts at the end of

the dark night of the soul

Author's Note

tear me apart

Reviews

[Lea Sheryn]

I won't tear you apart. I like your presentation. It's very well done and thought out. Most interesting.