Touch My Halberd

Touch My Halberd

A Poem by AJNJ
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Kiss it... ;)

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Touch my Halberd

Feel my lance!

Let me pierce you

Through and through

In this spring of  

Bloody romance

I’m your regent

Kiss my sword

Rising just for you

In lascivious vigilance

Oh milk my venom

dark and sweet

Passion grinding hips
limbs tangled till dawn

And in this wanton

Wild, war dance 

Ride me till nightfall

If love blossoms

Perchance…



© 2020 AJNJ


Author's Note

AJNJ
A halberd (also called halbard, halbert or Swiss voulge) is a two-handed pole weapon that came to prominent use during the 14th, 15th, and 16th centuries.

Another 10 word challenge...Thanks a ton for reading...

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As a male this one made me feel awkward, Pestonjee! I'll keep myself well away from any Halberd's, thank you very much! Once again you have illustrated your talent for constructing pieces from ten random words and this one, awkwardness aside, absolutely teems with erotic imagery. Halberd's, swords, lances.....all very regal weapons and excellent choices for your erotic metaphor and theme. Somehow I think this poem will go down a treat, especially with the old brigade in their second sexual awakenings! Kudos for another well constructed and written poem. Always interesting the themes you address given the words at your disposal. Whoever chooses these words is quite imaginative, too. I look forward to any future additions in this format. Well done, Pestonjee.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

3 Months Ago

Hi Brilliance! Thanks a ton, my friend! This review is a treat for me.
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A very naughty write and erotic poem, Pestonjee! Better a Halberd than a bent sickle, I would imagine. I am not familiar with 10 word challenges but I deduct you have hit the mark very well going on your other responses. I loved the poem and the way it is outlined on the page, too!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

Thanks for appreciating and enjoying this poem, Ms. Inessa! I enjoy these contests as I believe we .. read more
I like learning new words & "Halberd" is one for me! In all the sexy writing I've done, I'm always looking for some new way to refer to the almighty rod & you've just come up with one I've NEVER heard of! I won't go on about my "10-word" gripes becuz your poem could stand on its own without that dumb writing device, if only you would not bold the words (I mean, who really cares?) Reading the initial comment from Brilliance brings me to many similar responses that I've gotten becuz I write about the penis as if I'm in love with it, but many men cannot enjoy the idea of their own penises, so I've come to know. I'm not into women, but it's undeniable that the female form is awesome & should be revered in writing . . . so why not the male form, too? Just my rant. But your poem is well done & seductive & riding a well-balanced line between explicit & hinting (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

I'm delighted by your appreciation here because this is a poem special to me. I try here to be unapo.. read more

Forsooth & by Saint John, this is just so bloomin good in an old fashioned dragon slayin kinda erotic way.. Now where art them maidens mate :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

Hahaha! Most maidens are conspicously gone missing after this piece ;) Thanks a ton dear sir! Apprec.. read more
Amazing how old-fashioned weapons transported a few centuries onwards can take on a whole new meaning. Ten word challenge like the trusty Halbard is onto a winner.


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot :)
Rusting is in vogue these days....
This of course gives me a new image of that fine courtyard event... known as the joust! And they mounted there trusty steeds to ride into battle in an effort to penetrate the others defenses with there polearms to ensure great rewards for the victorious knight:/ don't worry I have a memory problem so it will go away in a jiffy:)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

And what follows is a fantastic battle of all battles hahaha. Thanks a ton sir. This cheered me up!
another very effectively done piece of work
you will become master of the ten-word challenge if you can keep it 'up'

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

3 Months Ago

I'm still doing BA in it so there's time for mastery but thanks a ton for such appreciation 🤗
Hmmm...bit of a double meaning here in this one. You did use the words well though. Very creative....and very seductive. Lydi**

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

3 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for stopping by with such kind words.
People and there dirty minds. Sheesh. :)
Interesting that it's a two handed pole though. Impressive.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

3 Months Ago

A two handed pole, needing two hands to handle hahahaha! 🤣 And that sounds formidable!
Tha.. read more
Without the splendid imagery, you would definitely have had to label this one as one for mature readers. The bad news is that as one ages, that sword tends to rise more and more slowly. A time will come when you can't even get it out of the scabbard.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

3 Months Ago

I've thought about that....will take up crochet and knitting with my partner then....At least someth.. read more
AJNJ

3 Months Ago

Also, a friend here tells me not to forget those little Blue M&Ms 🔵🔵 that can bring back some .. read more
Sorry, I' never touch another's halberd; got one of my own to feature and promote.
A classical--rather clever--piece of work.
Amusing read, P!




Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

3 Months Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this piece sir. Thanks a ton for the appreciation!

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