The Mask

Course the people that still make me suffer watch it

I have hidden behind a mask for so long,

I don't even know who I am anymore.

You created it.

I smile on the outside,

To hide the pain that overflows me.

 

I fall as no one is there to catch me.

I feel the pain, but no one stops it.

Go and pretend like you care about me.

Like I care what you think of me.

Hide behind your little mask, 

When I know the truth.

 

Make Up Your Lies

Kill Me Inside

Laugh At Me

Make Your Jokes

Make Me Feel Pain

 

Wear your sweet smile,

The makeup doesn't cover the scars.

 

If I'm "Everybody's Fool"

You must be the one who drags me down.

The one who doesn't care how much pain I take.

How much hell you put me through.

You watch me suffer.

Til I die.

Reviews

[Sweet Candy!]

thank you so much, you know life is full of different times thru the hurtful words and all the possible situations.

[Dillon Cotter]

nice job, we can all understand the feeling and imagery as well. i like it!

[LlamaLord]

The last line captures the readers attention brilliantly! I really loved this piece because of the way you split it into certain sections. One section, you tell us about how you feel and your reaction to the situation. Another section, You tell us how it affects you and also how others affect you through this. A very inspirational read! Thanks for sharin :)

-Austin

[Rachael]

I like this, and I can actually relate to it pretty well.
Nice job and keep them coming!!

[Skelasoldier]

Very good, keep up the good work!