Waiting

Waiting.
For you, for me, for us to begin
a sigh,
feels like such a long time
moments pass like years
slow,
slower...
the ticking of the clock
ticktock, ticktock, 
damn the time,
as it crawls along and stops.

My fingers caress my lips,
each cell in my body
remembers you well
and then... a sound,
the knob turns
jiggle,
click,
twist.
Hungry eyes
meet your own.
Now it's time,
to break the mold.

Reviews

[ron]

that was very sensual. I wish I could have that. This was a very beautiful write.

[Aramey]

Thank you, I'm glad you stopped to read my work and even more so, that you enjoyed it :)

[Inspiring Writer]

A lovely and a sweet write you made with some powerful words. Keep writing.

[Aramey]

Thank you, I'll probably always write. For me, it's like breathing :)

[Inspiring Writer]

Your Welcome!
Wow, I'm glad that some good people're too here who think that Writing's a breathe that's really great. Yeh, your right, it's really a breathe after all writing helps us knowing more who we are as well as raising the skills in everyone's stuffs too.
you seemed a great write, i'd love reading your more work as long as I'm here on this site.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Devotion beautifully expressed. Splendid read and write.

[Aramey]

Thank you Brandon, and thank you for stopping by.

[Steve]

I love the suspense and drama....and the romance too. Very sweet.

[Aramey]

Thank you Steve :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[Babe Roxx]

Beautiful poetry...I felt the yearning. Awesome.

[Aramey]

Thank you my friend, glad you stopped in and enjoyed :)

[Babe Roxx]

I stopped, for the pleasure of stopping by, to pause, and read your poetry which it fulfilled a titillating enjoyment indeed. :)