Word for knowledge

Word for knowledge

A Poem by ATaekwondo
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I stood there in the night,
it was dark,
but i could feel the endless boredom inside it,
it is like there is no light,
beyond, is just a dark and cold corridor,
it gets you to nowhere.

The endless scream of birds outside, 
and a picture of a beautiful girl in your mind,
maybe just a thought, maybe just crazyness,
maybe just loneliness.

Freedom is the key for victory,
but you are alreay free.
Is like an endless thought that makes you crazy,

And when you study,
you study about freedom,victory and injustice.
is like the key
for knowledge and justice

© 2011 ATaekwondo


Author's Note

ATaekwondo
Just tell me what you think, keep your mind open, the answers are all around you.

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Oh i liked this. It made the reader really think, which is enjoyable for any poem :) Good job!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed this piece. Great job

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was very creative and nice. I really loved the stanzas and how they flowed together. :)

~Lizzard~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice and creative. Continue writing to get better :D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 26, 2011
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ATaekwondo
ATaekwondo

London, Seven Sister, United Kingdom



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