blueberry midnights

a poem about a yearning for the one you love

blueberry midnights
and Ruel playing on
the turn table
and I am useless
when you are around
and wanting
it is 01:17pm
your bedroom walls
are peppermint

Reviews

[Jodash]

Smooth words about yearning for the beloved. Nicely penned.

[kimpetersen13kp]

Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to review my work.

[Ken e Bujold]

the concrete minimalism of this poem is what gives the work its strength. really enjoyed the read Kim, will be stopping by for more I'm sure

Ken e

[kimpetersen13kp]

Thank you so much. I really appreciate the feedback. I'll love it if you stick around. You're the best.

[sonnie ibadah]

I love the simplicity of this and the craving behind each word. Nice work!

[kimpetersen13kp]

Thank you so much—that's exactly what I was going for. I really appreciate your review. 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾

[sonnie ibadah]

A pleasure.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A very nice poem that brings me nostalgia and sweet memories of a time being young and in this kind of love. A very nice poem Kim.

[kimpetersen13kp]

I'm an so pleased that you enjoyed what I have written. I really appreciate you taking the time to review my work. Thank you.