My Love

My Love

A Poem by Abck
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To her

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Like a rainbow in rainy day
She came into my life
She has the aura of love
Take my heart by suprise
Oh boy she's my Juliet
Hey Girls,I'm her Romeo,
Baby,being together is our fate
I'll never let you go .


She completed me into full
For all these years I'm not
She bring passion on me
For all these years, they're dead
Oh boy she's my Juliet
Hey Girls,I'm her Romeo,
Baby,being together is our fate
I'll never let you go …………

© 2013 Abck


Author's Note

Abck
Ignore grammar problems.

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Very sweet, but more like a ballad than a poem, I'd think. Like it was meant to be a song or something of that nature. But that's not a bad thing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Abck

11 Years Ago

Thank you !!

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Added on April 8, 2013
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Tags: love, romance, life, lover

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Abck
Abck

Kathmandu, Bagmati, Nepal



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