A Cold Cave

The cold wind is all you feel here,
There is no warmth in this place,
Nobody can find it,

There may never be anyone else,
Its harder to find life each day,
And the temperature drops,

Then when it starts to freeze,
The snow melts,
The storm is over,

And i feel freed.

Reviews

[jC Lopez]

Pretty cold in there. I felt the cold trough the images. Good work.

[momo]

nice description very good imagery good write!