Deep Love

sometimes we fell in love with the most unexpected person because that person loved you when you could not love yourself...

Might be i was an amateur, beyond romantic prospect,

That exquisite encounter, still i recollect.

Your captivating smile,my vexed expressions,

Steadily, we had learnt some combined endearing lessons.

Despite being contrary to each other, we fell in love,

Since then we are ardent, like pretty pair of dove.

Abstaining from daily chores, all midnight discourse,

It was altogether charismatic and alluring force.

The undergone changes led to the brutal killing of heart,

Love never ceased after wrangles, that is a surpassing part.

This bonding is analogous to a felicific tree, while our credence is the root,

Manifestly, this story will succeed,we are being optimistic and resolute.

Reviews

[Anjali]

The words you've used here, are so strong and so mature! And the rhyming scheme is just amazing. Thirdly, the emotions and love you have put in this piece is.... Extraordinary. I'm sorry I'm reviewing this a bit late. But I really loved this one. Keep writing!

[Abhishek Asthana]

No worries if you reviewed late... what matters it should impact my readers the same way which I desire when i add any new piece... thanks a lot anjali

[Anjali]

Haha.... So true, you are welcome!

[Priyanshi]

"The undergone changes led to the brutal killing of heart,
Love never ceased after wrangles, that is a surpassing part."..... amazing lines, I loved it.
Beside that the comparison of couple with that of "pretty pair of dove". is so beautiful. Keep it up.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you,,, even many of my friends liked that point of comparison,,, it was my first romantic piece on this platform...

[Priyanshi]

pleasure is mine.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wonderful write....i loved this!

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much wajiha...

[horizon]

always there's a hope when we are in love..your words just are too generous as your love..it shows the promising behaviour of yours towards whom you love..truly amazing

[Abhishek Asthana]

i just wanted to emphasise on those hidden feelings which are deserve to be highlighted, when one is in relationship... appreciation means a lot to me... thank you so much for reading

[Jessica Lima]

Ah... to be young and in love....

[Abhishek Asthana]

yeah... moreover it's like an ache wherein you always bother about the person to whom are in love with... Thank you so much for reading Jessica

[Lavi]

True love is great feeling, awesome creation!

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank u so much lavi

[Ayush Mishra]

Amazing yarraa :) ...again the best piece of urs

[Abhishek Asthana]

haha.. best happens at only few times... its not periodic bro... thanks for reading !! :)

[TheAlphaOmega1123]

I see the beauty in this poem. Lovers are the most beautiful pieces of art anyone could ask for. I applaud to you.

[Abhishek Asthana]

it's been really encouraging... it means alot for me...thanks for reading

[TheAlphaOmega1123]

No problem buddy. I love reading poems with such inspiration in them. Keep making more, or else I'll..I'll be real upset!

[Abhishek Asthana]

not at all buddy... I'll keep on writing... nd hope u would like them... thanks again !!

[Surya]

*smile*, that's a beauty I can say, I enjoyed..:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

barely I write romantic pieces but the kind of response I have got, I am slightly satisfied... thank you so much for reading :)

[KT-B]

I liked this a lot "abstaining from daily chores" love can be all encompassing and to hell with everything else... love it :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

that's the thing we notice many times that people start ignoring each and every thing... this level of intimacy isn't something they experience with any other... thank you so much for reading... ,:)

[KT-B]

good stuff, was my pleasure :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the description quoted here. Very nice to read and the poem was rich in words. Tree and root are nicely used metaphors here.

[Abhishek Asthana]

since childhood I had seen many couples and observe their ups and downs... but at that point of time I was not mature enough to write down something about them which now I believe I can upto some extent...
I tried to compare the lead with the basics... I am glad you liked it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I gussed that those are your own emotions. You wrote really well after observing others. :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

yes i was used to be a keen observer since childhood can say...