Hopeless love

I'm in love with moon

I adore it

But why would it care?

It just smiles and I'm

Overwhelmed with joy

 

Bright, beautiful, splendid

And magnificent it is.

And to touch it I crave

But why would it care?

It just smiles and I'm

Overwhelmed with joy

 

Sometimes I peep out of my window

To have a glimpse of it

Sometimes I stare for a while

From my balcony

And Sometimes I stay inside

To see if it misses me

But why would it care?

It just smiles and I'm

Overwhelmed with joy.

 

Though I am aware

Of its indifference to me.

But I still crave for it.

I gloom when it hides

In the cloud and fog.

I wander restlessly

Here and there to have a look.

And then it appears,

 Again it smiles.

And yet again I'm

Overwhelmed with joy.

 

I wait for the day

The day it'll miss me too

The day it'll also look for me

And on that day

I would like to see its smile

And I can only imagine

 How beautiful it would be

I wait for that day

And it's more pleasant

Than anything else I can imagine

Even if I'm waiting in vain.

 

Reviews

[Deepika]

This is such a cute one:) I too get such thoughts often!

"But why would it care?
It just smiles and I'm
Overwhelmed with joy" this sounds so innocent and adorable:)

I enjoyed reading it !

[Abilash Uttama]

I'm pleased that you liked it :)

[Roshan Nair]

I think poets everywhere have a special place for the moon in their hearts :) great write abhilash. Liked it.. very beautiful imagery has been described here. Good work ! :)

[Abilash Uttama]

thanks brother :)

[Ana B.]

Beautiful title, beautiful write....seems like all we do is wait sometimes......lovely work.

[Abilash Uttama]

thank you Mam :)

[Anannya Saraswat]

Very nice Abhilash....you have good imaginative skills

[Abilash Uttama]

thanks Shilpi :)