The Wind

about life

The wind comes and goes taking with it the essance of the opposed

as we fail to see the complexity of our dreams and the light of which they bring.

 

We take life for grantite and run toward the sea but we cant imagine the life it breaths we fall into false hope and glory of the future and in the past we forget the power and repitince of what past acts pull across the opressing light

we pay strive and thrive off the world and its pretences we cant try to grasp the art of what has happened

so we shall try to strive off what we can learn and bring the past to life

Reviews

[Katie Louise Hughes]

I was drawn to the title - The Wind ( As it's also one of my favorite songs by Cat Stevens, lol) For the first stanza- it is true how people fail to see that our dreams in life are really important and gives us hope. Granite* spelling error, in the second stanza, although I'm sure this was written with the meaning in mind, and not technicalities. I like how you ended this- and how you try to define life. In truth, the definition of life is up for grabs, as there are endless possibilities for one to express his or her thoughts on what life really is. I appreciate your view on the subject. Thanks for the read, and keep up the writing! :D