Remember me

Remember me

A Poem by Aditi
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After some unforgettable years when two eyes again meet on another turn something beautiful is created.

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Morning it was,
'Walk to lose it' was decided,
a fresh start in a park with known faces, 
normal pace; flapping and flapping,
Something unusual catches my eye,
Our eyes meet which was usual,
the eyes which had catched my heart some years ago,
Confused ,adrenaline rushing, burning heart and eyes,
Only left was ignorance from m but could feel His eyes still following me and asking "Remember me?"

© 2014 Aditi


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Aditi
Reviews are welcome and all mistakes too. Pointing my mistakes will be helpful for me. Thankyou

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Our eyes meet which was usual,
the eyes which had catches my heart some years ago,
Confused ,adrenaline rushing, burning heart and eyes,
Only left was ignorance from m but could feel His eyes still following me and asking "Remember me?"

Wow dear..... This is not unusual to read you. Great imaginary and good crafted.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Our eyes meet which was usual,
the eyes which had catches my heart some years ago,
Confused ,adrenaline rushing, burning heart and eyes,
Only left was ignorance from m but could feel His eyes still following me and asking "Remember me?"

Wow dear..... This is not unusual to read you. Great imaginary and good crafted.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aditi
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Mumbai, India



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I am a new bud in writing world. I like to pen all flood like thoughts coming, and want a platform for improving my write up. Reviews are welcome Thank you. more..

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