Lies

Lies

A Poem by Adriann H
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Very short, very simple, just had to get it out.

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I knew all along,
but you said I was wrong,

You said I was a very good friend.

I knew that you'd hate me,
knew you'd forsake me,

That I'd be all alone in the end.
It's happened time and time again,

but you said that it would not

You said that you'd try,
as you'd started to cry,

But in the end,
your words had been false.

© 2015 Adriann H


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Nice meter, like a drum beat as you read it.

For a more layout for more visual impact, I recommend:

I knew all along,
but you said I was wrong,

You said I was a very good friend.

I knew that you'd hate me,
knew you'd forsake me,

That I'd be all alone in the end.
It's happened time and time again,

but you said that it would not

You said that you'd try,
as you'd started to cry,

But in the end,
your words had been false.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice meter, like a drum beat as you read it.

For a more layout for more visual impact, I recommend:

I knew all along,
but you said I was wrong,

You said I was a very good friend.

I knew that you'd hate me,
knew you'd forsake me,

That I'd be all alone in the end.
It's happened time and time again,

but you said that it would not

You said that you'd try,
as you'd started to cry,

But in the end,
your words had been false.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Adriann H
Adriann H

Ontario, Canada



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