Tempest

I was a summer breeze, and she was a tempest
I was a puddle, and she was an ocean
I was merely cloud in her whole atmosphere.
But she was the sun in my sky.

I was a tree and she was the forest,
I was a note and she was a symphony,
I was a flower in her meadow,
But she was all the stars in my night

Reviews

[Kailani]

Awesome imagery, I like your analogies too. Good job!

[A little flame]

You paint a stunning picture! I can't wait to read more of your work.