Let Us Live Here

There's no place like home that comforts with peace.

Tears continue to fall down

I do not want to leave this town

I can not understand why

Do I always need to cry?

I really love our house

Even if it has mouse

I love every part of it

I cannot live without it

The place where I learn

To love, smile and mourn

The memories in the walls

attached here, our souls

Please let us live here

I know you can hear

There's no place like this 

that comforts with peace

Please let us live here

I know you can hear

There's no place like this

That I will surely miss

Please let us live here

I know you can hear

I've been living here for years

and cried liter of tears

Please let us live here

I know you can hear

I'll leave this place never

Let us live here forever

Please let us live here

I know you can hear

I'm laying down my knees

So please! Please.. Please....

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Home should be a place of safety and love.
"Please let us live here
I know you can hear
I've been living here for years
and cried liter of tears"
I liked the emotion and want of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aerielle Louise]

Thank you. Glad you liked it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah right, No place like HOME :) This Poem is very inspiring. Great Message. Loved reading it. Amazing work Dear. You are Great at writing. You can become a Popular writer. Thanks for sharing

[Aerielle Louise]

How i wish I can become a popular writer. Haha. Thank you

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are WELCOME :)

[Confuser]

Aerielle: I just simply love it! It evoked so many memories of my childhood home and the happiness that we shared and never thinking of leaving; I also love the "foundation" of layers and repeating phases they lead to poem to a higher level. It also has great imagery and flow. The memories in the walls attached to our souls: Such a great line and there are many more. Now I'm smiling! Wow: How great! Thank you so very much. Dale

[Aerielle Louise]

Aww. Thank you so much. That poem was made with flowing tears. Haha. Glad you love it.

[Confuser]

Aerielle: Awwe: I understand and it is soooooo Beautiful!!!! Y/W: & T/K: Dale

[613]

Very beautiful poem. You have talent!

- Brittney

[Aerielle Louise]

Thank you Brittney :)

[613]

You're welcome!