X-mass Time Warp

What if that star were visitors from the future?

X-mass Time Warp

 

Centuries fly by.

Traveling through time,

our rockets burn

like stars on high

so we may learn

his paradigm.

Baby don‘t cry.

Reviews

[Chidoriflower]

This gave me goose bumps. And a twinge of wonder. It also reminds me of Superman. >3>
Amazing!

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Chidoriflower! I'm sure that it must give some readers a "twinge of wonder".

Star of wonder,
temporal light,
sending ever-ever bright
pathways through the dark of night.

[Chidoriflower]

You're very welcome, Aethereal. The extra poem is wonderfully magnificent.

[isus]

nice one, glad i stumble over this

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, isus! Emotional time loops connecting future and past.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It could be about a pattern that repeats itself that could be used as anticipated emotions.

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review! Yes, past events could set up loops in time by emotionally inspiring future time visitors to intersect with past events thus becoming part of the cause of such events. Emotions inspire time loops of endearment. Scientist think that our three dimensional universe is a projection from another reality, a two dimensional reality that creates an illusion of time and space. In short, everything is just a flow of information. The source of all this information is a mystery. We are information.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

This is very interesting "Scientist think that our three dimensional universe is a projection from another reality" will put your poem as a favorite.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i'm not so sure it wasn't...thoughtful little piece...love the short ones that say just enough to get us really pondering the possibilities.

jacob

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Jacob! If Time Travel is possible in the far future, then the big questions of Human History would be investigated. If there are any ancient records of Columns of Fire or Whirly-gigs in the sky , then this would be indicative of that attempt. Because of the Butterfly Effect, they would not be able to change history without destroying themselves, so only they would know the truth. They would make Human History work in such a way so as to ensures their survival.

[Rita L. Sev]

Now that is an interesting thought - your concept would make a great sci-fi Christmas story, Aethereal! Merry Christmas!

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your thoughtful review, Rita. Merry Christmas to you too! If any of us had a time machine, then here's where most of us would travel first. The sky over the Middle East must have been aglow in the early part of the first century AD.