Consumed

Maybe I can write you away

Reviews

[Laurierose]

Nice. This was very refreshing. This one sentence doesn't say much, though it says it all. I truly like this. To be so swallowed up by something so all encompassing could be often as simple to combat with simplicity. When we want to be free of someone/something, physically, emotionally, etc., then we may search for the best sense of release. Writing is very cathartic and therapeutic even when there are shoulders to lean on. I applaud and admire the strength in this piece. Great read.

[Ajh]

Thank you so much! I wanted to add more to it but the one line really does just say it all.

[Relic]

Writing out your feelings is one element of writing. Being able to construct it into something interesting is what poetry is all about. This one line says so much.

[Onlyme]

Spot on, profound and straight to the point. Can not ask for anything more. Great Job.

[Ajh]

I appreciate the feed back, thank you!

[Chris]

A lot to take in through the brevity of you thought.

[Ajh]

Sometimes it’s just the simplest thought that just says so much. Thank you for reading !

[Chris]

anytime...

[April Blue]

I love it.. Perfectly to the point.. I wish I could do the same with certain people.. Writing is such a powerful tool and you use it well here...

[Alexa Apothic Red]

So Great and perfect a thought in just one line... maybe I can just write you away.. ugh!!! It rips at the heart! It’s hopeful in the ability to forget the pain one caused. The words linger in me and maybe something I should say too.. maybe I can just write you away... bravo! Well said!

[Ajh]

Thank you so much! It’s exactly how I’ve been feeling lately.