My kind of Morphine

My kind of Morphine

A Poem by Aiden Marie

cutting myself so deep

that when the skin splits open

blood starts flowing out like a river

you catch me standing out in the rain

washing away all of my sin

so i can make it through another day

without having to run away

with blood as my kind of morphine

i can go on with my daily routine

of forgetting you quicker than the day before

im sick of being me i dont care anymore

these methane kisses on my neck

is the only thing that you left

with burn marks deep under my skin

i keep them hidden so you cant break in

with blood as my kind of morphine

i go on with my daily routine

of forgetting you and forgetting me

and everything that happened in between

this is my kind of morphine...

© 2008 Aiden Marie


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Graphic. You could have much better expressed yourself without the imagery (Sounds ironic, I know), but the blood could have been much better symbolized. I'm just an amature with an old car, but that's my take on it. Keep workin man.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I remember a time like that. I think you described it better then I ever could.

Posted 16 Years Ago


well said, thats exactly how i feel too :(

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 12, 2008

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Aiden Marie
Aiden Marie

O'Fallon, MO



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