#RANDOM THOUGHT 4

#RANDOM THOUGHT 4

A Poem by anonymous_at

Even if we weren't 
meant to be together,
I will make it sure
that heaven's gotta 
make a way for both 
of us "cause I ain't 
letting you go so 
easily

© 2018 anonymous_at


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Your direct poetic message harkens to a lifelong observation that longterm relationships happen becuz one or both parties MAKE it happen. Being together is not an easy thing for most & it's better to have someone around who's determined to keep things together. Your narrator sounds both determined, but also respectful of the other person's choices (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


We don't choose whom we love but we DO choose whom and what we like. I like the realness and heart within this piece.I do hope this path flows your way.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

anonymous_at

3 Years Ago

thanks, fr ur review :)....... but that path didn't flow my way .... and I ended up accepting the fa.. read more
Chris

3 Years Ago

Nods... a lot of us do that while we search for other paths to walk.
short but powerful. Like this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

anonymous_at

5 Years Ago

Thanks :) ....❤️

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voidness, void, India



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23 years old med student but still dumb 😂 Real life scares the livin’ s**t of me so I run to here 🫶🏻 Y’ll gotta be patient with my dumb lil grammatical errors .. more..

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