I'm a Little Owl

I'm a Little Owl

A Poem by Akashi
"

"Je suis un petit hibou."

"
I'm a little owl 
Sitting on a tree
All the wolves howl
When they see me

I'm a little owl 
My body is so wee
My eyes are like two bowls
I make the monsters flee

I'm a little owl
Turning my head 'round
I can see the back of me
Without even making a sound

I'm a little owl
Sitting on a tree
They say my tongue is fowl
But they don't even know me.

© 2014 Akashi


Author's Note

Akashi
I wrote this just because I like owls.

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I really love the last stanza though! "Just because i like owls" you sound like its whatever, but the end seems profound to me

Posted 9 Years Ago


Akashi

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
aw, its a nice and adorable poem ^^
i really like the rhymes c:

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akashi

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
this is beautiful....and nice rhymes too

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akashi

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
This a a very novel approach and quite cute. You style is quite enjoyable and I like the way it flows.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akashi

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
A fine poem, full of charm..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akashi

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
"I'm a little owl
Sitting on a tree
They say my tongue is fowl
But they don't even know me."
~(~
I love this, the rhyme and rhythm are perfect. I love owls too.
This reminded me of Gylfie from the Guardians Of Ga'Hoole series.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akashi

10 Years Ago

Cool. Thanks.
Bluefire

10 Years Ago

No problem. =3
THIS POEM IS ADORABLE. I LOVE IT. I WILL HOLD IT AND SNUGGLE IT FOREVA.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akashi

10 Years Ago

Uhmm-okay.
Cute and unique. Liked it

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akashi

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
This poem actually sounds like a song. Stunning write, loved it.

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akashi

10 Years Ago

Oh, thank you again and again and again and again and again. :) Many thanks.
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
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Nice flow of thoughts. I like the owl. A bird that is a predator and still some mystery for us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akashi

10 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Added on March 29, 2014
Last Updated on March 29, 2014
Tags: owls, trees, wolves, and tongues.

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