Father: A great personality

Father: A great personality

A Poem by Amit Dhiman
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Father a superhero...

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Father, the statue of responsibilities
which he's doing with full abilities,

Father, a hand for the child
& the first step for the child,

Father, a superhero for the child
as he's all done superwork for the child,

Father, have the great experiences
don't take tension of child's expenses,

Father, the right navigator
& he's the best educator,

Father, the head of family
& the great consultant for family,

Father, the surplus of power
& he's giving blessings as shower.

© 2017 Amit Dhiman


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Oh my goodness!!!
This is like...... a big wowwwww.....
And I think till now, you've not written in English much... And so, this piece , being in English language, is your best piece i can say....
true facts... true thoughts...
So very pleasant...
I too wrote about dad... Till today 2 poems for him....
I too love my dad too much !!!
I hope your dad will be proud of you reading this piece....
Please go and read out this poem to him... and let him know how much you do love him......
Keep writing...
I'm here to support you always!!!
Ani....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amit Dhiman

7 Years Ago

Thanks Ani.... I do...
Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...



Reviews

Oh my goodness!!!
This is like...... a big wowwwww.....
And I think till now, you've not written in English much... And so, this piece , being in English language, is your best piece i can say....
true facts... true thoughts...
So very pleasant...
I too wrote about dad... Till today 2 poems for him....
I too love my dad too much !!!
I hope your dad will be proud of you reading this piece....
Please go and read out this poem to him... and let him know how much you do love him......
Keep writing...
I'm here to support you always!!!
Ani....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amit Dhiman

7 Years Ago

Thanks Ani.... I do...
Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...

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Added on January 13, 2017
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Amit Dhiman
Amit Dhiman

Chandigarh, Punjab, India



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Paramedical student and I love to write poetry. Writing poetry is my passion..... more..

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