To:__ __

Her beauty is evident.

Her smile is heaven sent.

Her eyes are green.

Sincerity she gleams.

Her kindness is genuine.

Her fragrance is feminine.

Her hair is truly perfect.

No split ends dare hurt it.

Men's eyes always stare.

As she passes their air.

But only the flesh they see,

When her truth is beneath.

Her truth within shines,

So bright that it blinds.

But only few really know,

of this beauty, pure as snow.

What someone must show,

Hides beneath her glow.

A heart made of gold,

Now the world shall know.

Reviews

[C. Porter]

Mmm, I love descriptiveness:)
The only beef I've got with it is that it takes a really solid rhythm for me to get into it. If you've ever read my work (which I doubt, just though I'd put it out there, lol), you'll know this is really hypocritical, but I haven't done it in a while.
Anyway, besides that I really like it. KUdos!

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Awesome poem :)

[Melody-Rose;]

I love how descriptive it is. A wonderful poem.

[Jeff]

Excellent description of this woman.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a good poem. I really like this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Stephen Churchill]

the title is great and the poem has a pretty strong flow. cool stuff!

[Cynthia]

A amazing poem!!!
The title attracts me well to read betwee all your work.
Nice Written

[Ruth]

I like the surreality of the title lol
This is lovely :)
Excellent scanning and wording for this one :)
A woman of beauty it would seem lol
Awesome
xx

[china]

The way you describe the inner and outer beauty of the girl is fantastic. Keep up the good work

[Sweets]

That's amazing =)
You described her in a great way !
How lucky that girl is :)
Great job on this =)