Anticipation

She hasn't come yet

Still waits for the one she met

Now her eyes are wet

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[Nightfall]

She hasn't come, she' plucked & started to eat fruit plum,
she has her hairs blonde, then why shes trying to wet her eyes rum...

Her eyes're wet, but this's love's thread,
that can be break within a second,
but leave the pains only in your head...
that makes you dead, love's mad,
it has it's own shade, because, love's a craze....

you this writing's really very nice, contained much depth in your words,
that i can't say that it's a dirt,
because, you've got a talent of writing & now you're growing.....

She did wait for the one she met, but he didn't come but make her teary wet,
now what'll she do, would she die or ;ll take another's ride,
but i don;t think because, she 'has her shy,
that's why she did cry......

"Anticipation", this's you tittle's name,
it's really suite on your depth of word's game,
your name "Anshika",it's quite as a fame,
i did love your this writing, ~varun is my name".....

May i ask from where you've got this idea to write,
because, it' was so right,
at every-night, every~girl thinks about this view of sight + site,
i think you'll b one day much bright...as a sun~shine..&'ll get your pride....!!

I think you this writing had been come from your reality....ain't...?
anyway, if i did hurt ya to ask this ques...you can cay....wait...?
you're a nice writer...by your this writing i can say,
you're the one here...believe me it's not a claim......!!