shiver

fingers trail the blood and stench.
remorse had no place on this end of the island.

rage was not the cause,
rage was the response.

Reviews

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Amazing Alan...so short but powerful...a masterpiece...

[Steph]

I really like this poem! For a piece so short, it's amazing that you were able to portray such effectiveness and danger. I loved the wording of the last two lines. You definitely have a natural flair for poetry writing!

[alan khan]

Thanks very much! I really appreciate you saying that.

[Ink Seductress]

Well-penned. I look forward to reading more.

[S]

Such a clear message of danger signal . Wow. I have literally never read a write so small yet so strong! well done!

[alan khan]

thanks very much :)

[misha]

This was a short yet strong piece. Very well written!

[alan khan]

thanks very much :)

[misha]

You are welcome :-)