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shiver

shiver

A Poem by alan khan

fingers trail the blood and stench.
remorse had no place on this end of the island.

rage was not the cause,
rage was the response.

© 2014 alan khan


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Amazing Alan...so short but powerful...a masterpiece...

Posted 4 Years Ago


I really like this poem! For a piece so short, it's amazing that you were able to portray such effectiveness and danger. I loved the wording of the last two lines. You definitely have a natural flair for poetry writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

alan khan

4 Years Ago

Thanks very much! I really appreciate you saying that.
Well-penned. I look forward to reading more.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a clear message of danger signal . Wow. I have literally never read a write so small yet so strong! well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

alan khan

5 Years Ago

thanks very much :)
This was a short yet strong piece. Very well written!

Posted 5 Years Ago


alan khan

5 Years Ago

thanks very much :)
misha

5 Years Ago

You are welcome :-)

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Mint Hill, NC



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