A Man Called Lies

A Man Called Lies

A Poem by Alani
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People can make empty promises...

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She’s just a little angel… everyone adores her

She paints a smiling face, and makes the world crumble

Going through life on a unicorn, she wears strings of pearls

Her hair… waves of curls.

 

One day, a crow came down and picked out her eyes.

Who was there to save her, a man called lies

He found her on the pavement, lying face down.

Swindling arms around her, he promised new life

 

She’s never known anything more than lies… 

he takes care of her, by giving her his eyes.

She’s never seen the world this way… 

afraid to go out, into the open again

 

It took her a while to get over the pain…

Afraid the crow might come back again.

The fear it inflicted had caused her to hide…

Return of the man.. oh, the man called lies

 

She’s never known anything more than lies… 

he takes care of her, by giving her his eyes.

She’s never seen the world this way… 

afraid to go out, into the open again

 

He promised to piece her together...

He promised to give her new sight

Oh the man called lies... 


One day a crow came down and picked out her eyes

Who was there to save her? A man called lies

Ironic don’t you think, that he’d be there in a blink?

© 2014 Alani


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Fantastic write!
What a treat to read today.
This felt like a song and I can almost here the lyrical story being sung in a gentle alto humming to a folk song melody.
Ironic indeed btw... Great work here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alani

9 Years Ago

Thanks David Scott :)
It is indeed a song... I am recording the song for my first album, as w.. read more
Extremely intriguing poem today. Dark and deep but filled with truth about lies. Lies destroy. I enjoyed this very much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alani

9 Years Ago

Thanks :)
All my poems are based on my life.
I think most people can relate to lies be.. read more
I suppose you are right...lies create a world different from the reality we have known and yet we are afraid to return to the truth. Enjoyed the song within.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alani

9 Years Ago

Yes... and also our reality changes once we are aware of others and their intentions
Very interesting and amazingly written...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alani

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome

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Added on May 5, 2014
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Alani
Alani

Joburg, South Africa



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