My Flip-flops

My Flip-flops

A Poem by Alani
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5-7-5 sorta haiku

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I love my flip-flops 
They're colored like soda-pops 
I'm glad they're not heels

© 2011 Alani


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Very sweet! I love the color too, and the way its expressed so simply.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alani

9 Years Ago

Why thank you :) x
hahaha!! Have you ever worn heals? ;) :P

Posted 12 Years Ago
hah, yes flip flops are just a tad more comfortable lol : )

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tight and Clean and Superb. Well done Alani from South Africa :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on August 18, 2011
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Alani
Alani

Joburg, South Africa



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