Toes

Silly poem about toes

toes fat and thin

toes broad and narrow

toes with coloured toenails

and toes...

oh how dirty! 

Author's Note

just a silly poem about toes :)

Reviews

[willweb]

Sounds like it is time for a bath. Fun and happy Alani.

[Alani]

hahaha... I wrote it when my toes were dirty :P

[Stephen]

Lol .. Silly? Umm .. I don`t think, it`s silly ~~ but a very .. umm ... Yeah, (I got the word) it`s, very Childish which even suits your personality ;) *Wink*

[Alani]

I have a childish personality? haha

[Stephen]

Alani`s every muse`s what makes the world beautiful .. Umm yeah, of course, you`ve got a beautiful childish personality around the world which makes the beats of all the hearts fast indeed with your smiles *Wink* ;)

[Alani]

haha :) Thanks.
In South Africa, childish is a bad word to say to a lady... but I believe you mean well. You probably mean I have a fun and childlike side to me? xx

[Stephen]

Oh .. yeah, yeah .. of course, Childish means .. your very nice, funny and like a kid at heart, your funny .. I really didn`t mean anything bad. I`m so sorry .. I really don`t know about your Culture ... Sorry if it hurts you :)

[Alani]

It didn't hurt me dear. hahha.. I actually laughed!

[Stephen]

Whao ... Alani Laughed!! Whao .. i`m so blessed to make a beautiful Alani laugh. Umm, thanks for laughing and yeah ..keep laughing as well, after all, it`s your laugh which makes my heart beating fast .. *Wink*

[Eric Pudalov]

Very cute poem. I've always thought the word "toes" sounded funny, ever since I was little. It kind of reminds me of the Norah Jones song "Toes," (even though that's about a relationship). But yes, I like the poem.

[Alani]

Though I like Norah Jones, I have never heard that song before... I will give it a listen :)
And.. cute was what I was trying for ;)