Pain that I deserve.

My Emo poem for today.

I look at you, and I feel pain, I'm undeserving, I'm undeserving.
We're together and yet far apart, I'm deserving, I'm undeserving.
Death would be an easy way out, yet, I'm undeserving, I'm undeserving.
Your kisses are a forbidden fruit, I'm undeserving, I'm undeserving.

Now you are gone, and I am empty, this I deserve, this I deserve.
You're with him, and the pain wells up, this I deserve, this I deserve.
You stabbed my back, and it bled tears, that I deserved, that I deserved.
My heart is empty, and it is cracked, this I deserve, this I deserve.
My lips are black, and my tears are clear, this I deserve, this I deserve.
Your tears are blades to my heart, this I deserve, this I deserve.

Author's Note

I'm still working on it. I'll add more as it comes.

Reviews

[Tayler]

This was very good, it made me want to give you a hug. Melanie just told me that you don't really feel like this, which is a good thing. It'd be terrible for anyone to feel this way.

Anyhow, the poem itself was an exceptionally good poem :)

[Melanie Nicole]

Goodness gracious. The poem made me want to kill myself. Which is a good thing! The reader is uppised to feel like you do, and you do a very good job of it! :) this is great! Well, not that you're sad, obviously, but it's an excellent poem.