Is that true?

Is that true?

A Poem by The writer

Is that true?

When I look at your eyes,
I feel that I can fly.
When I look at your smile,
I feel alive.

You are wonderful,
you made mi world colorful.
You make my heartbeat,
now my life is more than a simple beat.

But I think that you 
might not feel the same.
They told me you do, is that true?
Do you feel the same too?

- The Writer

© 2021 The writer


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The writer
Ignore grammar problems, thanks for reading!

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This is a really good poem written from the heart. It reminds me of my very first crush at age 9. Her name was Brenda and I remember asking myself exactly the same words you wrote in this poem. I was way to scared to ever tell her that I like her. Even if I could go back in time I would still be to scared to tell her that she is beautiful. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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This is a really good poem written from the heart. It reminds me of my very first crush at age 9. Her name was Brenda and I remember asking myself exactly the same words you wrote in this poem. I was way to scared to ever tell her that I like her. Even if I could go back in time I would still be to scared to tell her that she is beautiful. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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