you need to go

you need to go -

i decided to let you slide

from the arms that were holding you too tightly

you need to go

join your tribe

take the trait you left on my skin with you so that i do not

search for your reference

in my wounds 

you need to go

and pack up all the promises

and inconsistent moves

that led me to believe you made sense in my space

go and take the smile you left on my cheek in the morning

and take the heavy breath 

you left on my neck when you fucked me for the last time

you need to go - 

Reviews

[Chris]

but was it REALLY the LAST time - echoes come back from all the things and moments touched, memories elicited and created... scents and even music - sounds - tied inexplicably to thens no longer nows...
sigh.

[keith]

sometimes one needs to say 'see ya, bye' and this is well written in a straight forward manner.
message sent loud and clear.

[Ardra]

you need to go
join your tribe
take the trait you left on my skin with you so that i do not
search for your reference
in my wounds
you need to go
and pack up all the promises
and inconsistent moves

nicely done :)