Scar's...

Why do i feel this way
why do i cry in pain
why can't i just be like
i used to be..
i sat in a sit far from my peer's
looking at the scar's
no one could ever see.
i pulled away from the tight-ness around my wrist
looking up
to see Jake..
With a smirk in his face
with in the next hour
everyone fond out
and because of my scar's
my life was torn apart

Reviews

[Pretty_as_a_Poet]

Very Strong Emotions!!!!! Nice write!

[ÅŁєxx ƒσx]

thank you:) sorry for the late reply i dont get on as much anymore>_>

[Rob Santana]

Deep write. Strong emotions, nicely done.

[ÅŁєxx ƒσx]

Thank's This timeframe was when every one was bulling me for being scene
and Jake was THE bully after that it got worse now im homeschooled because it got so bad

[Rob Santana]

That's fucked up. I was bullied as a kid so I know exactly what you've gone through. One day I just couldn't take it anymore I snapped, and well let's just say that b*****d got dealt with. After that no one ever messed with me. But I was scarred by it. I was filled with rage and anger. Stay strong, stay posted up.

[ÅŁєxx ƒσx]

I dont want to expose you or myself into my commite's so if you read the res of my poem's and the story Darling's,Alexx Fox
you''ll understand i but more

[ÅŁєxx ƒσx]

Bit*

[Zap-the-awesome]

Emotionally swaying poem. Good again.

[Admiral Kirk]

This is a beautiful poem... It expresses this deep, raw emotion that I believe is familiar to many. Particularly me. ;) Beautifully put.