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This was an assignment for my english class. A petrach sonnet.

I do not believe of love at first sight,
because it was a kiss that stole my heart,
and thats when the drama began to start,
and I´ll never forget that fateful night.

They say that love is pain and it does bite,
I must agree that to love is an art,
I feel like I was struck by a love dart,
I swear that I have never felt sooo right!

And yet I couldn´t help feeling lied to,
some secret I wasn´t supposed to know,

what did I do to deserve this my boo,
how could you have fallen so damn low,

because you broke and shattered my heart so,
tell me baby how to forgive you.
 

Author's Note

Originally written Jan 17th 2008

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Wish I got assignments like this in lit. Class. Good form.

[Wildecat]

Excellent flow, easy to read, nice work.

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awesome!...very awesome!!

[Vaishali..^_^]

it's a awesome write...very well written....great work....!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I loved this piece of writing a lot, flowed very well....
You have conveyed your feeling here very beautifully!
Great work :)