Devotion

Devotion

A Poem by Brian Hall

Mirror image of a broken truth
Eclipsing envy of my youth
Light evolves to darkened visions
Inner demons making decisions
Suffocating grip on reality
Slow erosion of my sanity
A fallen beast begins to rise
Among the purest angel's cries
Never ending questions
Never answered questions
Evils pull on me
Makes it hard to see
Everything looks wrong
Alone for far to long
Destiny destroyed
Or just another void
Worst of all the pain
Still love you all the same...

© 2013 Brian Hall


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I really like this.. I think it's the words you chose.. just so powerful. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Brian Hall

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much

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Added on April 28, 2013
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