Directions For Destiny's Heartland

Directions For Destiny's Heartland

A Poem by Allen Smuckler
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Decided to repost....hope you don't mind.

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Westerly flows on

a northbound

express..

Trembling wasteland

in the dreams of

her dress...

 

Southerly tides

in East Michigan’s

winter...

cascading skies

under a buried

splinter...

 

Destiny’s heartland

in the middle of

nowhere...

condoms and fish gear

on a diet of

Lite Beer...

 

 


 

© 2012 Allen Smuckler


Author's Note

Allen Smuckler
December 3, 2000
touched up July 30, 2009
Picture of Marilyn in Key West, Fla. - February, 2011

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I love Marilyn, she was definitely a classic beauty. And the poem is amazing; I love the rhyme and flow of it. Brilliantly written, dear friend!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I do enjoy a good rhyme my friend and I must say that this is
a tremendous write. I'm diggin the infamous Marilyn pic, it adds
a certain nostalgic feel with a humorist twist..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love the last stanza, This is amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting...I am literally forced to think and imagine with your words. The picture, oh so lovely.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lol! You are full of surprises? I loe Marilyn Monro she will always be the sexiest woman ever lived! You wrote:
Destiny’s heartland
in the middle of
nowhere...
condoms and fish gear
on a diet of

Lite Beer...


Definitely a man's perspective ;)


Posted 12 Years Ago


I, too, feel like I am not aware of some back story going on here. But regardless, I really like the words you chose to write with. Plus, you always have a great picture to accompany your write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like your photos. This photo is beautiful. I like the description in the poem. Took me to many place with your words. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you for letting me know you changed this one.............quite an interesting story you have going here that I am apparently not privy to. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I had to smile at this...I feel as though there is an entire back story that I'm not privy to. Loved the rhythm and rhyme. Nice to meet you!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Allen Smuckler
Allen Smuckler

Sarasota, FL



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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger.. looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..

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