Check For Updates

...we all search in our own way...

                                         

 

Check for updates and

look beyond what is real.

Discover those alone

in thought and

imagine

the unimaginable.

Check for updates while

above the heights

of tomorrow and

wonder

the unbelievable,

accomplish

the impossible.

Check for updates but

process the

unexplainable and

reach

outside the limits.

Create

and become

what was never

conceived.

We must always be

the keepers of the keys,

and remember to

check for updates…

 

          

Author's Note

January 14, 2011...Picture: Disney World at concession stand
Please feel free to critique to your heart's content...
Allen

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo. Updates and what is next for us. I miss the days when life wasn't organized and planned. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Becky C Strukamp]

No critiques here. This is an amazing poem. Rolls off the tongue and into ones mind, landing on an awakening of life. Beautifully penned!!!

We must always be
the keepers of the keys,
and remember to
check for updates…

A marvelous stanza, keeping check on ones life, today and tomorrow. Looking deeper than the surface of things. I love this.

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Allen I think it is pretty good. I was wondering though, is that Raymar from Metro Zoo? I just love that Gorilla... xo

[Sukriti Suki]

This is real good. Speaks out to the reader. I really like the format, engrossing.

[Brad]

love this calling to the reader to open ones eyes, recheck what was thought to be checked, nothing is the same as it was last year, last month, last week, yesterday, an hour ago, and even a minute ago!

[London]

Create

and become

what was never

conceived.

We must always be

the keepers of the keys


Great lines and a great write!

[Lily Mae]

I love it and my favorite is "keeper of the keys"..perfect..xx

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love this! We all own keys to our life, and it's up to us to use them wisely! Excellent descripted poem!

[Sunni Davis]

I simply love this! The concept is brilliant and inspirational. We are indeed the keepers of the keys, to our own fate, our own lives and somewhat, to those around us. Its up to us to keep in check.

[ImagineItAll]

By the title, I was expecting a poem about computers. Thank goodness this wasn't it! I love when you write "We must always be the keepers of the keys" because I think most people forget that they, in fact, can be in control of their destiny. And to "accomplish the impossible" is very possible if we are simply paying attention to the world around us!