Asea

 

floundering souls


searching for the essence


in the sea of humanity,


for what is important,


has meaning, and matters.


 

It is we who care for us


and help those who


can't help themselves...



 

or something like that…

 

Asea



 

That's how my poetry 


comes to be...

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Written: September 7, 2010
Photo: Key West, FL (February 1, 2011)

Reviews

[RainQueen]

Much meaning in so few words. Lovely~

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

precious composite with the human element styling beautifully~

[?]

for what is important,
has meaning and matters. (Very true lines)

It is we who care for us

and help those who

can't help themselves..

We are all floundering souls searching for the essence of/in LIFE
Very nice, I liked this one alot
Says so much in such few lines

[Tate Morgan]

To be oneself sometimes makes you be seen as the leader of the band

[Poetic Beauty]

I really liked this poem. It is mellow and smooth. It makes you think deeper thoughts

[Mika Haruna]

I love it!!! Its short and carries alot of meanin, good job!