Burnt Bottom Cookies

MMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmMMMMMMMM!!!!!

 

                        Burnt Bottom Cookies

Sitting ‘round the breakfast bar

four women fresh from lunch.

I bound upstairs from afar

thoughts of what I’d munch.

Sure I thought, a peach or pear

perhaps a tangerine…

           

I said to all those in a row,

I’m starved beyond repair.

 

That pang I feel within my gut

is not my missing hair.

I want, I need, I have a hunch.

can’t anybody share?

 

Some burnt bottom cookies

the  girls exclaimed!!!

Chocolate chip or oatmeal,

the choice is surely yours.

 

Now, I like muffin tops

and love pistachios

any kind of fruit or wine

and always chocolate.

 

But burnt bottom cookies?

mmmm!! So tasty and devine.                      

Helped launch me into orbit,

and made my day so fine...

 

 

Author's Note

I just love 'em...what can I say.
just for fun...
mmmMMMmmm!!!

Reviews

[Jane Korunoski]

Great work. Keep it up!!! ALtought i think there is a strong message beyond this poem, hidden behind the the cookies.

[Cassie Fraga]

hahahahahaha!!! welp this was a very fun read!!! burnt bottom cookies I've never tried em.... hhhmmmm... I think Ill do that and get back to you on how I took to them!! GREAT WRITE!!

[Relic]

I can't say I've ever relished in cookies that were burnt on the bottom (I like chocolate cookies warm and soft) but you've made it sound appetizing and interesting. I'll keep this in mind and wait around about ten minutes longer if I ever decide to have some.

[Kiari Sabon]

lol that was amazing

[Mockingbird]

a whimsical tribute to burnt bottom cookies. i picture your 4th grade character asking his mom to burn them just for him.

[Becky C Strukamp]

This is very uplifting and free spirited. Reminds me of my own youth and my attempts at baking...LOL...Delightfully penned and presented. You painted happy atmosphere...its a pleasure to read this! Now, look what you've done though...I want cookies, and I want them chocolate..burnt bottoms or not! Smile!

[light and ashes]

Lol cute poem! I prefer unburt cookies but thats just me :) I enjoyed this.

[Shy Girl]

That was just....um...I have soooo got to make a batch now..thanks :) I just had to read this in the morning too...timing...sheesh :) This was imaginative and very creative...I enjoyed it very much...close second to those cookies and muffins I love sooooooo much.. :)

[Chris]

Chuckling here...