The Rain

...and along with the music, she could remember the rain on that warm summer afternoon...

How everything began with skies promising a clear day...

the sun was at its peak and the chirping of the birds could be heard amidst the traffic

Then suddenly the weather turned around... from a drizzle into a storm the rain lashed out its fury almost like an answer to all the confusions in her life.

and just like the start, the rain calmed down...along with it, her heart.

                Quietly she took out her music player, turned off the music and walked along the fresh path the rain had paved...

    .....the dust had settled..

       ...there was peace...

Author's Note

...help me improve my writing skills. Do drop in your constructive criticisms.. ^-^

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful short story. You create place, thoughts and good ending. You are very talented. Hard to write complete story in so few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent story.
Coyote

[Zoe Naga]

Thank you for your positive feedback. Truly!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.