I Couldn't Win

I Couldn't Win

A Poem by Alone In A Crowd

This poem is about how I tried so hard with something going on in my life, but I feel like I've fallen apart and just couldn't win.


Hello. Yes

Faced with the uncertainty of not knowing-

The shrieking of paranoia and self doubt ,

Began rising and flooding into my limbs.

Filling them with fear until they get too heavy to carry...

They fall. I fall too.

Into darkness I went;

Spiralling and screaming.

This fight; I can't win.

© 2014 Alone In A Crowd

Author's Note

Alone In A Crowd
Thank you for reading and as always I'm open to any constructive criticism you may have for me. Thank you.

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Added on August 2, 2014
Last Updated on August 2, 2014
Tags: Fallen, Apart, Lost, Detered, Scared


Alone In A Crowd
Alone In A Crowd

United Kingdom

Hi, I'm 15 and live in the United Kingdom. I started writing after my English teacher began helping me cope with the things I'm going through. I definately prefer poems and trying to add meaning to th.. more..

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