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Pain.

Pain.

A Poem by Aly
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=D

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Pain.
Such a terrible thing,
But also so very wonderful.
Addictive.
A drug.
Im hooked.
Hooked on this substance that frees me from reality.
Pain-
Life.

© 2009 Aly


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Too cliche. Sorry. Honesty hurts but it helps in the end. Too short as well. Whats so good about it? What does it do for you etc etc.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


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 Added on February 22, 2009

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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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