HAIKU- Weather.

HAIKU- Weather.

A Poem by Aly
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Trees rustle wildly
Swaying in the winter wind
Dancing with themselves
 
Clouds cover the sky
Trapping us in a dark place
Turning the sky grey
 
Rain falls from the sky
Pouring down on us below
Drowning all the plants
 
The sun emerges
Cleaning up all the damage
Revealing beauty

© 2009 Aly


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Very sweet poem. More like a collection of haikus but you pulled it off well, it's hard to stick to a specific syllable limit. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 9, 2009

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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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A Poem by Aly