Falling

Falling down its so deep

It's so dark I can't see

Someone help me!

This blackness around me

Reach me!

Catch me!

Hold me!

I can see a glimmer

That light above

That beautiful light from the bottom of the well......

I smile....

I fight :) 

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Started in a dark thought and ended with a positive vibe lifts up the whole poem... Nicely done... Falling down in a deep dark world is a painful thing but when we fight to come out of it, our capabilities become more stronger...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Amaclaire]

ahh thank you for your comment :)

[Elizabeth]

I loved this poem! It is very deep and I loved how it ended!

[Amaclaire]

thank you so much, glad you liked it :)