[ God where did I go wrong ]

[ God where did I go wrong ]

A Poem by Amalie

God where did I go wrong
My soul feels empty
My life all gone

I once was so close
I felt so free
But a few words from a stranger
Have completely damaged me

I was happy with you
Now my life is a mess
Everything was so right
Now I'm depressed

Everything went so wrong
What was old now is new
I’m back at square one
And don’t know what to do

All I can do
Is leave it up to you
Please bring me back to where I was
Only you can help me through
 

© 2009 Amalie


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I like how the poem is directed toward someone.
its well written.
im sure many people can relate to this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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