Look into my eyes

Our eyes are the gateway to our soul.

Look into my eyes do you see the road  that is matching  my soul ,deep down inside a empty hole with nowhere  to go , deep down inside the hell Fire tourching my soul should be a crime but i dont not mind , here where  i Reside burning  with constant  hope deep in my eyes looking and wishing there was more time so we can be devine, look into my eyes tell me if i am or not worth you time ,look into my eyes an tell me your love is real or if its a Disguise for how you feel no need to lie share a gaze all we have is time  , i look into your eyes and feel at home and i feel alive where i should reside deep in your eyes, with my eyes i feel i see time passes  us by with no time to Confide , deep in this time  i feel we lost so much life that was real it just passed  us by, life, time ,love ,the whole deal locked  up deep inside our feels there so real, look into  my eyes  and know this love is real an so is this time i feel my hope is fighting  to stay alive a conflict between heart and mind, look into  my eyes and take this deal a royal  flush is how we should feel a king an jester and a queen an a ace a 10 deal are you really  fine with letting this slip by where we should reside,look into my eyes and feel at home  and where you should reside and feel Comfortable to share what is deep inside our  eyes.

Author's Note

Im working on my grammatical issue it is my weekes point in writing i hope you enjoy this thank you <3 this was inspired by the song "my eyes"

Reviews

[ekostim]

I found this poem did a good job articulating all the different things we might communicate just by looking at another person in the eyes. Interesting read and good reminder of how much we can glean from another person’s gaze.

[AManOfLove]

Im glad your enjoyed it thank you for your review :)