In Her Head

A long time ago there lived a girl,
Who had monsters living in her head,
They made the happy things blur,
They made the sadness remain constant,

When she would try to concentrate,
The monsters would out of their boredom,
Try to ruin it with several of their baits,
Until her mind would be too tired and done,

They were jealous and envious monsters,
"Why would they want you as a friend?"
They would say to her, to isolate her,
They ruin her mind, till she is completely ruined,

The monsters are her now and she is the monsters.

Author's Note

Criticism and reviews are appreciated.

Reviews

[tvisa parmar]

I like how you have portrayed depression and it’s symptoms. Also the fact that you choose to narrate the gloomy tale of a girl.

[Illumina]

Thank you so much for the review! Means a lot to me :)

[tvisa parmar]

Well i can relate to the poem a lot, so thank you !