Hope

“AHHH”                                

The pain

Became visual                       

Blood

On my hands                          

Blood

Dripping                         

 From my mouth

Upon a wounded knee                                   

Was all I that I had fought for summed up in this moment?                                      

Who was this walking away? 

The pain…It clouded…                             

Everything

These people                  

surrounding us

Why?                        

The sky was so close

Who was that?!    

Staring down  

God?  

Please  

Please Help  

I know my sins are there 

But I did all of this

I think I did all of this  

For the betterment of all 

 Through this chaos  

I gave my everything

Didn’t I?

 I don’t know

All is… 

“Silence”  

Came a voice ever so soft 

 “This victory will be yours”

Memories        

The dark man walking away

The people who had followed me          

 to the edge of eternity 

We were upon a building top                  

This was god above me                                     

I DID do this for the betterment of all                                      

 I DID give my everything                  

For a future                         

Not so dark                          

“HEY!”             

 I shouted into what felt like

oblivion                                                        

The man’s head slowly

turned to me                    

 With a smirk                             

He now began to approach again                 

Saying something   

It wasn’t important              

Rather                     

It couldn’t supersede                                       

This feeling inside     

I was changing         

His sword came forth                                      

I began to feel one hundred percent whole                                             

He smiled                                  

An unrelenting power was

Growing

He drew back his sword                                              

It was going to burst

His sword came to

And

It was for nothing   

Out of nowhere  

A sword appeared in my hand  

To block his  

The mere shock of the two blades colliding  

Threw him back  

In this moment I knew what I must do  

I charged

Headstrong  

Into the fray that was this mans…this demons might  

He swung another stroke at me

Missed  

I dodged  

Tackled him from underneath 

And off we went into a plummeting spiral

Toward the ground

He laughed

He still thought he had me

“With the power of us both

 And the speed of descent

We will drive ourselves all the way

To the gates of hell

You know this right?”

I looked at him

And for the first time in this bout

I smiled

“Well then let’s bring you home”

So that is what we did

We went home

Reviews

[Jamie Cook]

The man’s head slowly
turned to me
ME: Ah! Holy s**t...exorcist? O_o

I want to go home too :o Ahaha, no but this was an interesting format, it was little, which kept my attention to be honest, cause I have the mindset of an idiot unfortunately. But it was good :) I liked the different things that go on, a little confusing but great overall. Well done :3

[Americore]

I appreciate the review first off and yeah I agree my writing can be confusing a lot of the time. For that I apologize because I don't want to confuse anyone reading my writing at all. Still trying to work out the kinks of taking ideas from my mind and translating it through my impatient fingers haha.

[Jamie Cook]

Haha, it's okay :) I do it a lot too, but really wonderful work ^-^